Sunday 29 March 2015

The Puppy

My puppy  licks me.  I like it when she licks me, it is so so funny .
She is one year old. Her name is Coco.
She is awesome.
She feels like a fluffy warm scarf.
She looks a white cloud.




                                                                                  
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous29 March 2015 at 20:59

    Adding more description about how the puppy looks and feels has made your writing more interesting, good work :)

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  2. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 17:08

    Your puppy sounds so CUTE!!
    I love puppy's that are fluffy.
    Does your puppy look like the one in the picture

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